Authors note: After the movie Cherry has to drive home with Bob and he does not look very happy.
As Bob and I drove home I couldn’t help but think about Ponyboy and what would happen to him.
“I can’t believe you were hanging out with that Greaser.” Bob sighed.
“I don’t care that he is a Greaser! He was nice and that is all that matters!” I spit back with aggression. All Bob every really cares about is getting drunk and beating up kids, I thought to myself.
“Bob don’t blame those Greasers it was my idea to walk with them.” I said trying to be as convincing as possible.
“I don’t care Cherry! It is always something knew with you, I never know what you are going to do next.” Bob argued. It is not my fault I can find the good in everyone. Maybe that is my problem; I care about too many people. Bob looked really angry; I am just dreading what he will do after I get out of this Mustang. We were only a few blocks from my house now, my palms were so sweaty is seemed as if it was raining.
“Bob just listen to me; I know I messed up tonight but don’t do anything you will regret. Be mad at me not at the Greaser’s even break up with me, if you want.” I was breathing heavily now all the windows were cloudy.
“Cherry I am not going to break up with you, and trust me I won’t do anything I will regret.” Bob laughed. Oh no! We were at my house now, I was out of time. All I can hope is that Ponyboy is at home safe. As I got out of the car Bob had fiery in his eyes. Every step was in slow motion as I moved towards my house. Everything started to spin around me. It seemed as if an hour passed by the time I got to my front door. Who knew what was going to happen as the blue Mustang sped around the corner off in the East.
I think that it was great! You did have two errors but they were minor. I think that it was good predicting of what was going to happen and great vocabulary as well.
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